Tuesday, October 9, 2007

My POG part 1

When it comes to government, I believe that we as humans need to instead of trying to rule each other and seak revenge on one another, I think we should are just worry about ourselves and treat others the way in which we would like to be treated.

4 comments:

Cornelius said...

this is very well written

BrianaByrd said...

I think you did a good job explaining your self and getting your point accros.

K'la said...

I like it you had one very small error but still gave a strong argument.

Tory said...

I like your essay but it was kinda short but powerful. Im outtie and 5 stacks, Tory